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'“Why would I do that?” said Elijah, only half kidding.'

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This is good. No idea where it's going to it's interesting.

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I love this. I am totally hooked!

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The flow of the writing is wonderful! and inspiring. It sets the bar for writing dialogue and plot VERY high <G>

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Loving this!

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I need one of those drinks. And I want to be friends with Lorinda.

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I am breathless with anticipation to read the next chapter, and to make one of those cocktails.

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