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Joe Z's avatar

I should have started reading this earlier.

Roy Edroso's avatar

'“Why would I do that?” said Elijah, only half kidding.'

RC's avatar

This is good. No idea where it's going to it's interesting.

The_Shadout_Mapes's avatar

I love this. I am totally hooked!

Leonard Frieling's avatar

The flow of the writing is wonderful! and inspiring. It sets the bar for writing dialogue and plot VERY high <G>

Elizabeth Bowes's avatar

I need one of those drinks. And I want to be friends with Lorinda.

Michele Gendelman's avatar

I am breathless with anticipation to read the next chapter, and to make one of those cocktails.