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Morgana Gray's avatar

Oh my gosh, I'm so invested in these characters! I would "buy you a coffee" but I'm broke af. I'll share though!

Leonard Frieling's avatar

when I started reading this I thought it was supposed to be fiction. And the chapters seem to be shorter; meaning I am left wanting to read MORE! Again, well done. Great story line, wonderful telling of the tale, chilling as all good fiction horror stories are. Another post-apocalyptic nightmare or the front page of the Wash Post? Hard to tell which.

Jim Parker's avatar

This continues to be both wonderfully entertaining, and absolutely terrifying a hell. Thanks for the nightmares.

Steve Radlauer's avatar

Oops. Just spotted a typo in the comment I posted a minute ago, which I guess follows this one. I put parens within parens when I should have used [brackets]. See? Even when I'm writing about typos I'm making typos.

Steve Radlauer's avatar

Major personal breakthrough! Our guardian angel, Rebecca at Wonkette, just taught me how to edit chapters that have already been posted. (Until now all we've done is write the chapters and send them to her. Wonkette (by which I think I mean Rebecca) has done all the posting and other internet-type work.) But one of our astute readers (thanks, Elizabeth) caught a typo in the FIRST SENTENCE of chapter 16--"though" instead of "through." (Proofreading one's own writing--or at least doing a good job proofreading one's own writing--is a near impossibility. I could go on and on about it, but whatever I wrote would probably be full of typos, so I won't.) Anyway, Rebecca told me what to do and I did it. Typo fixed. Of course, this doesn't change the emails that arrived in our paid subscribers' inboxes today, and for that I abjectly apologize.

elledanselajavanaise's avatar

love this installment.