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What a relief it is that she is just being shadowed by her baby-daddy and not some malignant secret police, not that Brad's interest is likely to be harmless. When your oblivious protagonist is being trailed by persons unknown in a dystopian novel, brace yourself for very bad things to happen, maybe Room 101, maybe something even worse.

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FUNNY stuff, and sad that it is funny. I suppose "irony" would be a better word choice. The synergy of Steve and Ellis's writing is wonderful and fun to read. I love as I have from Chapter One, the flow, the story line, and the piece as a whole as released so far. GREAT work!!! And I don't say "!!!" lightly!

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Oh, Lorinda. Do I ever understand that displaced Texas pride. I yearn for the Texas of Ann Richards. Or maybe I just yearn for the ignorance I had of the ugliness in people’s hearts.

It is long past time to Mess with Texas. Vote Blue No Matter Who!

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